Ghoulishtie's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Flash RPG demo]

pretty good...but

It was good for starters, but here are a few things you need to fix for it to be very sucessful and worth passing the portal.

-Dont be so close on the battle. Zoom it out. Also most of the rpgs have more than 1 character. This was a demo and yes I understand only having mario, but if ur gona make a real one, have more than one, or make it where u get more through the story.
-Dont make the 'entering battle' and 'exiting battle' so long. When u defeat the opponent(s), dont do that 'special text effects' stuff. keep it simple. Try this. When you defeat all the enemies, make it sorta 'darken' (like an eclipse just happened after every battle) and make the drops, exp, ect (non darkened) pop up. As in you still see the characters in the background (shadowed out), but ur looking and interacting with the window that shows the exp, drops, ect.
- Again zoom out during the 'adventure' part of the game. dont make it so close. Also make sure to include (in the real game) first strikes and stuff. As in if u hit the enemy first, you get to deal damage at the beginning.

Besides those, just work a little on the overall flash technique, and u should do fine.

chunkycheese12 responds:

thank you and i will keep those suggestions in mind. Also that enemy dying bit was just to show 'the end of the demo' sort of thing.

[The Unfair Platformer]

cookie for u

wow...i never thought i would play a game someone would make that would be like all those other modded up super mario bros games that they play on youtube and stuff. i thought this would be some fighting game that would suck, but the first few times i died, i actually smiled! I rarely smile or laugh at a game. I do much more for flash movies. you my good sir, deserve a newgrounds cookie of the week!

EggysGames responds:

YAYAYAYAYA A COOKIE :D :D <3

[Orb Blaster]

the upgrade screen of doom

fix the upgrade loading screen. I always have the most updated version of flash player, and it still wont load. Im holding my real vote untill its fixed.

[Dark Cut²]

somethings wrong

It seems like a nice game and all, but the needle & thread is screwed up. i keep clicking where the stars are, but it only got 1. i had 30 seconds left, and i kept clicking, then time was out and i only got it in once! wtf?! its good, but cant even get past first lvl cause of the needle.

[Mouse Madness V2]

ummm

why does my health go down when im an inch away from em? i didnt touch one but i lost on the 3rd lvl cause my health randomly went down..

Boguzman responds:

Who knows, just try to be more careful next time.
P.S. Don't exaggerate by saying an inch, i know there's a slight miscalculation of a few pixels, but it's nowhere near an inch.

[Squidwards Adventure demo]

nice work

Just work on some of the graphics, get the controls fixed, and get more of a storyline goin. Good try as a demo, just make the real one a little better ^_^

[..:: BeatBox Beta ::..]

yay

make it longer is all i have to say

[Pandemic]

I do like it but...

I just dont understand it much...the instructions dont help me out much. all im doin is sittin here clickin 'go' & losing everytime. Doesnt matter if ive killed 10,000 by the last day...i didnt earn 1 single point! something wont work...or is it me? someone help...

[Domino Frenzy]

augh...

it was good...just that everytime I make a turn 1 domino is just in range of being knocked over...but it wont...& it messes up the whole thing....thats wut ruined it.

freeworldgroup responds:

just like real life

[Hungry Hungry Caesar]

it was ok but...

1the retarded frycook kept appearing infront of the dude so i lost 5 seconds every well....5 seconds! & the lawsuit dude disappears waaay to quickly. also its kinda hard to aim when their all stacked up on eachother......thats wut the overall 0 is for...